WS 35: Adult Contemporary novels comparison

We compare the opening pages of classic novels with contemporary novels.

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7 responses to “WS 35: Adult Contemporary novels comparison

  • K. Bill Albrecht

    I love this idea. First pages, paragraphs, and sentences really are important, and I really need to work on them.

    Interesting that your first example breaks some of the current rules, or maybe defies conventional wisdom. And yet that is such a great opening. Why do you think it works? I think it’s because it starts with a mystery or a contradiction– she’s not beautiful, but men think she is.

    PS – You spelled contemporary wrong.

  • K. Bill Albrecht

    Also, you guys sound like you’re in a cave or something.

  • alicebeesley

    Thanks K. Bill. The first example is from a classic. That kind of description worked back then but not now. People now want more action/voice. maybe it’s because we live in such a fast paced world with so many other distractions: computer, etc. competing for our attention. I’m not sure why it sounds funny. Our original computer we usually do the podcasts on is having problems so we did it on a laptop. Maybe that’s the difference. Thanks for your patience.

  • K. Bill Albrecht

    No problem. The next podcast doesn’t have the same issue, so I guess you guys have worked it out. πŸ™‚

    Also, sometimes I think that people have more patience than we give them credit for. But maybe that’s because I like to take a little time at the start of my stories. And maybe it would be better for me to just reconcile myself to the desires of my audience.

    • alicebeesley

      I”m the same way. I love description and the classics for that reason but I’m finding editors and agents want faster paced stories that jump right into the problem, at least in YA novels.

      • K. Bill Albrecht

        My problem is that I like dialogue too much. I don’t put enough description in, or enough action. I just write dialogue, because it’s fun. If I’m not careful, my work comes out like a poor Quentin Tarrantino or Seinfeld imitation. At best, it’s witty banter about nothing. At worst, it’s just inane chatter.

        But I think it’s productive, too, because dialogue is how I find the voice of the characters. Maybe I just need to be better at editing, and cutting out bits of clever conversation that really aren’t moving the plot forward.

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